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发布于：2017-01-25 10:39
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31楼#
发布于：2017-01-25 17:05
情景交融，让人有很深的感触。
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32楼#
发布于：2017-03-01 10:56
同学你好，李华老师的亲笔点评赠与你，愿你写作水平越来越好！
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发布于：2017-03-03 19:53
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发布于：2017-03-03 22:46
也许故乡的确是每个人永恒的心的归宿。谢谢老师的亲笔点评，以后我还会继续努力，守一份心灵的纯净，在岁月的流逝中不扰不惊。（老师，hmjzxhfy是一句话的开头字母，蛮好记的）（得到老师的亲笔回信太激动啦，老师的作文课超赞呢！能得到老师的亲笔回信我实在是深感荣幸！！）
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35楼#
发布于：2017-03-05 12:44
真的，同学，写的真好
你的名字是哪句话的开头字母呀 |
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36楼#
发布于：2017-03-07 19:43
黄色有点累眼，还是黑白大字比较好
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发布于：2017-03-10 17:54
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发布于：2018-10-19 19:52
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