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发布于：2017-01-31 18:21
LyJ1314：写的不错 我已经赞了 互赞吧[初中组]【作文3】 我恩师的一个梦，http://bbs.jd100.com/read.php?tid=764567&fid=411&page=1回到原帖我已赞过，你的文章写的非常好 |
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发布于：2017-02-01 22:52
lz1025750034：我已赞过，文章写的不错回到原帖卸卸~ |
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发布于：2017-02-06 15:40
同学你好，你敢谈他人所不敢谈，且改变中国思想文化的心值得鼓励！然而本文有点偏题，还希望修改。你谈了蜕变的必要性，一直说不变会怎样，但却没说变了又会怎样？因为作文已事实上是说塑造之后的美好。
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发布于：2017-02-10 00:51
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发布于：2017-09-24 15:51
同学，你的思想要是被共产党知道了，会被拉出去毙了的
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发布于：2017-10-16 23:07
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