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老师改一下这作文吧，哪些错点呢？谢谢了。 February 12th,is my father'sbirthday.That day,Ibought a bag and intended to give it to my father as a gift....全文
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Teacherhei：suitcases got on the subway train subway train 地铁一般说为 subway .But,I was just thinking it when I saw the unhappinesss on the woman...(2010-05-25 10:11)
