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发布于：2017-03-03 22:46
也许故乡的确是每个人永恒的心的归宿。谢谢老师的亲笔点评，以后我还会继续努力，守一份心灵的纯净，在岁月的流逝中不扰不惊。（老师，hmjzxhfy是一句话的开头字母，蛮好记的）（得到老师的亲笔回信太激动啦，老师的作文课超赞呢！能得到老师的亲笔回信我实在是深感荣幸！！）
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发布于：2017-03-03 19:53
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发布于：2017-03-01 10:56
同学你好，李华老师的亲笔点评赠与你，愿你写作水平越来越好！
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发布于：2017-01-25 17:05
情景交融，让人有很深的感触。
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发布于：2017-01-25 10:39
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发布于：2017-01-25 10:38
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16楼#
发布于：2017-01-23 20:40
谢谢啦，就帮帮忙呗
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发布于：2017-01-23 20:39
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发布于：2017-01-14 11:37
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发布于：2017-01-11 21:58
写得真好！我已经赞了！顺便也帮我赞个吧 http://bbs.jd100.com/read.php?tid=765088&fid=411#read_3817825
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