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发布于：2014-03-21 23:37
注意平仄了么？每首词都有固定的平仄，注意了更好
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发布于：2014-03-22 09:07
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发布于：2021-06-05 13:16
记得词牌是有韵脚的哦～
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发布于：2021-06-14 09:58
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