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[学习方法]E单元 短文改错

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目录
E单元 短文改错 1
E1 短文改错记叙文 1
E2 短文改错应用文 3
E3 短文改错议论文 4
E4 短文改错说明文 4



           
E1 短文改错记叙文
【英语卷·2014届黑龙江省大庆铁人中学高三考前模拟冲刺(201405) 解析】第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
E1  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
 修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
 注意:1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Editor,
  I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale. Fortunately, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital. After several hours' treatment they finally escaped from death.
As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures. Nor do they care about which happens to consumers. They shall be charged with law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.
解析:
第一句:neighbor 改为 neighbors ,由下文they 可知是复数。
第二句:buying 改为 bought 过去分词作后置定语,表示被动。
       Turn 改为 turned;与前文时态保持一致。
第三句:去掉on:打电话直接用call; call on 号召;呼吁;
第五句:only前加 are:be interested in 固定搭配,对……感兴趣。
       We 改为 they:根据上下文逻辑关系,应当是他们,而不是我们。
第六句:which改为what:宾语从句,what做主语;which做定语,故用what。
第七句:with改为by:按照法律用by,搭配。
        Whole前加the或our:the/our whole 习惯用法。
第八句:important改为importance:the 后加名词。


【英语卷(解析)·2014届山西省山大附中高三5月月考(201405)】
E1第一节 短文改错(共 10 小题;每小题 l 分.满分 10 分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is five years now since I graduate from No. 3 High School. Last Saturday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further study, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.
【答案】
1.graduate-graduated  考查动词的时态。It is 时间since 从句用一般过去时。
2.on-in              考查介词。句意:上周日,我所在的班级举行了一个聚会。In class所在的班级。
3.prepare-to prepare  考查目的状语。上周,我们班举行一个聚会,这花费了我们很长的时间去准备。Take time to do 花费时间做某事。
4.去掉the            考查固定短语。句意:联系上每个人,安排好一个时间确实不容易。Get in touch with 与。。取得联系。
5.well-good           考查形容词。句意:联系上每个人,安排好一个时间确实不容易。Good 用来修饰time.
6.remember-remembering 考查非谓语动词。句意:我们度过珍贵的一天,回忆往日的时光与熟悉的人。Remembering是伴随状语。
7.they-we              考查代词。句意:回忆我们所熟悉的人。The people 是先行词,we were familiar with 是定语从句。
8.which-that             考查主语从句。句意:有一些人出国了没有能来参加,感到非常的遗憾。It is a pity that,固定句型结构。
9.to 去掉            考查固定短语。 Go abraod出国,abroad是副词,故to 要省略掉。
10.card-cards           考查名词。句意:但是他们都从不同的地方打过电话或发送贺卡来。




E2 短文改错应用文

【吉林省吉林市2014届高三下学期第二次模拟考试 英语(2014吉林二模)】E2第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下书信。
书信中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
     2、只允许修改10处,多者从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the subject I’m learning at school, I like English best. I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly. So I really hope to take this chance improve it. If possible, I’d like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England, that Im particularly interested in. I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.  
                                                        Yours truly,
                                                          Li Hua
Dear Sir,
Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your
               inviting                                               my
choice between the two courses, I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow

me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends. Of all the subject I’m
and                             subjects
learning at school, I like English best. I had been learning English for 6 years but my
have
spoken English remains poorly. So I hope to take this chance ∧improve it. If possible, I’d
poor                           to
like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in

England, that Im particularly interested in. I believe I will have ∧ wonderful time this
      which                                           a
summer.  
Yours truly,
                                                          Li Hua
【答案解析】inviteinbiting 介词for+V-ing
            Yourmy   根据文章内容,人称代词必须保持一致。
            because ofbecause   because of加名词或动词ingbecause加句子 this will allow me是完整的句子,所以删除of.
            butand
            subjectsubjects  of all the +可数名词的复数
            hadhave    for 6 years 用现在完成时
            poorlypoor  remain (系动词):保持+adj.(做表语)He remained silent. 他保持沉默。
            chance后加 to  take th chance to do 抓住机会做
            thatwhich  which 引导的非限定性定语从句。that 不能引导非限定性定语从句。
            have 后加 a   have a/an time  固定搭配


【【全品原创解析纯word版】吉林省九校联合体2014届高三第二次摸底考试英语试题解析】 第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
 E2 假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下便条便条中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
    增加:缺词处加个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
    删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
    修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
    注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
            2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
  Last year I bought the refrigerator in your store on Hong Qi Street. We all like the shape of the refrigerator. Recently I have found anything is wrong with it. It begins to make a noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradual it becomes louder and louder. To make matter worse, it even stopped working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing to you to ask for help. Would you please send a person to repair? I will at home this weekend. Please call me until you come here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thanks you very much.
                                         Li Ming
【文章解读】这是一封投诉信,投诉购买的冰箱出了问题,要求商家派人来
1.【答案解析】the—a去年我在红旗路买了一台冰箱。第一次提到用a
2.【答案解析】anything—somethiing  anything用于否定句和一般疑问句。肯定句用something
3.【答案解析】turned前加is或it去掉当打开的时候,它会发出一种噪音。It(冰箱)和turn on(打开)是被动关系,所以给it后加is。It begins to make a noise when (it is) turned on可以用省略句:主从句主语相,省略从句主语it和is。
4.【答案解析】gradual—gradually一开始很低,但是逐渐的声音越来越大。修饰句子用副词:gradual—gradually
5.【答案解析】matter—matters固定搭配to make matters worse 更糟糕的是;情况更糟糕;更糟的是
6.【答案解析】stopped—stops它甚至停止工作了。这篇文章用的是一般现在时:stopped—stops
7.【答案解析】disappointing—disappointed我感到很失望。修饰人用disappointed
8.【答案解析】repair—repair it 及物动词repair缺宾语it 能请你派一个人来修它吗?
9.【答案解析】until—before/when在来之前(当你来的时候)打电话给我。连词错误until—before/when
10.【答案解析】Thanks—Thank非常感谢。这是祈使句,用动词原形:Thanks--Thank





E3 短文改错议论文

【英语卷·2014届黑龙江省哈三中高三下学期第三次模拟考试(201405) 解析】第一节短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
E3 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
      2.只允许修改10处, 多者从第11处起不计分。
Nowadays, with the living standard rises, a large amount waste can be found in our school. For example, some students tended to leave the lights on during the day and water run after washing. They also throw away the food what they don’t like. So it is high time we dealt with these problems. We should do the followed things.

First of all, we should turn off the lights and the tap before we use them. Secondly, we’d

better eat up what we buy in the school cafeteria. More important, we should form the habit of

saving natural resources however we do.

Personally, it is everybody’s duty to stop wasting. If we don’t take action now, and the

limited resources on the earth will run out soon.
1.everybody---nobody  
2.去掉themselves
3.are---were
4.year---years    
5. in---by
6.to open
7.such---so    
8.cry---crying
9.the---a  
10.laughing---laughter或者into---out burst into laughter=burst out laughing

E4 短文改错说明文

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